Importance of Clear Writing
Good prose is like a window pane - #GeorgeOrwel
Op-ed is a functional writing
Three Kinds of Obstacles
Obstacles of meaning
Obstacles of construction
obstacles of sound
Brackets - obstruct flow of reading
Put full stop when you have to
Writers Imperative
- Keep the reader hooked
- not waste their time
- smooth ride
Sentence Level Mistake
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Bigger words than necessary
- even visually creates problem
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Redundancies
we mustn't over exaggerate - #TimHenman
- despite the fact that - although
- increase the size of - increase
- at the moment in time - now
- Operators are verbal false limbs - verb becomes phrase
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Long Sentences
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Clumsy Construction
- Brackets - obstruct flow of reading
- Put full stop when you have to
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Clichés and dead phrases
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Unnecessary Adjectives
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Adverbs
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Cleverness
- Can be a break in a smooth ride
- no distraction within the article
if it sounds like writing, I rewrite it - #ElmoreLeonard
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Never use metaphor, simile or other figures of speech which you are used to seeing in print
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Never use a long word where a short one will do
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if it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it
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never us the passive, where you can use the active
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If you can find a everyday English equivalent
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VS Naipal's rules
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do not write long Sentences - 10 or 13
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each sentence should make a good statement - it should add to the statement before - sentence must go forward or deeper
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do not use more big words
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never use words whose meaning you are not sure of
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the beginner should avoid using adjectives, except those of colour, size and number. use as few adverbs as possible
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Avoid the abstract, always go for the concrete
Paragraph Level Mistakes
- Long blocks of text
- Functionless sentences
- obstacles that force the reader to reverse
- The later,
- as previously mentioned
- pun not intended
- passive sentence constructions
Tips for Smooth Writing
- Keep it simple
- make it shorter - hard for us
- *You should think in pictures - images *
- keep your readers happy